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hehehehoo . actually my teacher ask me to write again about what i've wrote on essay book on the past saturday class in an A4 coloured paper . do you know why ? because dia nak tampal hasil keje aku and another friends kat papan kenyataan kat belakang kelas . aiyooo . okayy mmg terkejut le juge tp sempat lg teacher perli kepelatan aku ketika ber-speaking . yadaaa~!!! xD masa hari sabtu yg lepas , kitorg buat one paragraph essay about what we saw based on a picture in the magazine that had given by my beloved teacher, Puan Faridah Hanum ! aku pun buatlah dgn semangat ! semangat pny semangat . dah siap then aku pun berlari-lari anak ke teacher untuk mendapatkan kritikan ! (yela sgt!) then aku cubelah speaking kat teacher, bgthu siap2 mcm ni haa > " i'm sorry teacher but-duhh .... maybe i have some minor grammatical errors" (siap ngn gaya lagi tau!) then teacher replied with "hahahahaha(laughing out loud)" . erghhh time tu aku lemas dan terasa seperti ditenggelami seribu satu rahsia kot . aku pun tnyelah, "teacher why are you laughing at me ?" (with a sad face on my face) . then teacher told me that she heard i've said 'grandma-tical' . ouhh shhushhtt ! my pelat come suddenly . ouhh shame on me !!! >,< and after teacher said good-job for me because my essay quite interesting to her . so it's beyond my expectations :DD eventhough i'm not a good pronouncer (due to the pelat diseases xD) but i feel glad to hear that from you my teacher :D